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           (2)原因或举例(for instance)
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   firecrackers     ban firecrackers
wf/| {o'Rz6zi0   tradition                     pollution
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Sr/[c1T3Ox7}wE0Firecrackers are the great invention of ancient Chinese to dispel ghosts and embrace the coming of a new year.

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kID,Uui0Job-hopping is a common phenomenon that means changing jobs frequently.

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Opportunity is something that everybody yearn for through their life.紫金香N#? t$w v}g]I6u

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There is a public controversy about the problem whether to set firecrackers or not during Spring Festivals.紫金香\ J }(T1D

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!wA k)v,L!B0A heated discussion whether a test of spoken English is necessary is in the air nowadays.

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1jnK!Sv/sU0To do sth or not to do sth. That is the question.

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As to whether to do or to do, there is no agreement among the public.紫金香v s3Ze\|#p

C-M,i oh wm(`0As to whether to watch Spring Festival Gala on the eve of a new year,  there is no agreement among the public.
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Some college students have gone through the same experience with me and argue that students should take a part time job for the reason that it can not only to help them pay for  their tuition, but also make a lot of friends.

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3H7`VSx|lk"Y0Along the street I caught sight of the car of my next-door neighbor’s. With full gratefulness I begged my neighbor to take my friend to the hospital. My roommate was saved in time because of the car.

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If you do not have such experience, you would never know how important a car is to your life.紫金香UhYDT-[8U4rS

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Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou city? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the fragrance Hill?
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As a result, these new working experiences, in turn, also make them feel excited about their lives.紫金香~VJhK?1rLS2}

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The idea that students should take part-time jobs is condemned by some professors and lecturers considering the fact that it may disturb the academic life of their students. 

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On the contrary, others insist that setting firecrackers should be banned on the ground that it is bound to cause serious air pollution. Besides, manufacturing firecrackers may also produce some wastes. These wastes, in turn, would cause serious water pollution if they are directly dumped into rivers.

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Tastes differ. Others may oppose to job-hopping. Their opposition arises from the fact that royalty is always one of employers’ considerations when they are recruiting.

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Personally speaking, _________. (My argument arise from the fact______.)

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From my point of view,________(, which have roots in my consideration that ____.)紫金香C?;HX wF)m
As far as I am concerned, _______(owing to the fact that_________________.)

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Personally speaking, firecrackers should not be banned. I just can not imagine what the Spring Festivals would look like without the sparks of firecrackers. Life would look boring in that way. 紫金香0ZbcR B)d3L]

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As a result, I set up my mind to do sth to my full capacity.

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g,H)@1D r(T/{^0Thus, I am determined to spare no efforts to  prepare for the spoken English test.

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It is recommended that________.
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Have you ever feel embarrassed when you encounter a foreigner? Have you ever got stuck in face-to-face communication with English speakers?

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Have you ever wished to find one to practice oral English with you? If you had such experience, you would realize how important oral English is to your lives. 紫金香2O1@BF3Q6H3b

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\1RxY:P K[5q,k0 After analyzing the pros and cons of this test, I concede its benefits outweighs its drawbacks. We can access our English level through this test. It can guide us to learn oral English well.

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It is recommended that students should take it during their college years.紫金香F(_e'N W v8hv3xs)S"o

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三、解决段
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2. As the statistics frequently appeared on Internet reveal,__________________.
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4. According to the recent survey conducted by a certain official organization,________
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3. the number of ___has increased/decreased by % from __to____.
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Why this problem become so widespread is that ______________________.紫金香tSN;kSP5k
This problem occurs for_________.紫金香5PC6y,\qGE2n,e@V!L
Such a problem arises from (the fact that__)
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If this situation remains unsolved, it will exert great influences on people’s lives, if not consciously.紫金香fOS0e9\nE
If this situation continues, ______ will exert more positive influences on the _____.紫金香8X}"J3pcRVd
Were the situation to continue, our society would be bound to suffer a huge loss/benefit a lot in all aspects.紫金香 Bxqg#FJ8Au)uY6I ~

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One the other hand, the public should keep on the awareness that ⑴__is vital for us. ⑵they should do sth. Only in this way can we witness the ideal scene in which all the people can enjoy their life to the utmost.

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In order to tackle this problem, we can take two measures.

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B#vo$M$Y%N.y0Facing this situation, effective and efficient measures have to be taken.
O P L%Q!AN0It’s imperative for us to take severe measures to put it on hold. 紫金香{ f8f#t(])W
What measures should be taken to arrest and reverse this grave situation? 紫金香7?DT TG.H eqeb

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To overcome this difficulty, it’s necessary to take effective steps to reverse the disturbing trend shown in the pictures.
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I assume that happy and brilliant future is awaiting us if we exert every effort to it.

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Many options still exist, and human beings can still have a bright future.紫金香#q&S @&@)oJ(f2u
Only in this way can we have a bright future.紫金香-t6l Y#OTe
A promising future will be at the corner when all the measures are taken.

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现象阐述
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Hence, I decide to try the utmost to __
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观点论证型
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