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题目特征:
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另一些人认为……
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第二段(1)另一种观点紫金香w(I7Q0e@:Nc
           (2)原因或举例(for instance)
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1u,H2f S(W0   firecrackers     ban firecrackers紫金香 P~8H%|};]a:n4O'G
   tradition                     pollution紫金香iOi@v%G'}
   celebrate         money consuming
5n5yp*v r.@.H0   beautiful                     not safe
rY%b2]_~1v x0   good memories            resources
e{ It@K5i&{pU0   communication             traffic  紫金香 A|a `,xbuzt

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+@"ypir U8_*g2I p0(1) 话题引入
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 _______ is (something/a process/a kind of substance/animal)紫金香 Y/lOL O,@^
that/to/of ________.紫金香!O;G3Zzsd"~9ce%x

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A teacher is someone who input knowledge into students’ minds.

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Firecrackers are the great invention of ancient Chinese to dispel ghosts and embrace the coming of a new year.紫金香q V&WW3Vrw\

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Mem.kQy's2]0Reading is a process of obtaining gist information. However, whether to read selectively or extensively has aroused heated discussion among the public.紫金香W Pnr"l/g

!A4B*IO+`0Job-hopping is a common phenomenon that means changing jobs frequently.

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._O2\zzI2O.U0Opportunity is something that everybody yearn for through their life.紫金香 S*MRv F!mD

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A test of spoken English is a test to access students’ ability to express themselves orally.

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Lucky numbers are numbers that to bring good luck to people.
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1. There is a (public/general) +(debate/discussion/controversy) 紫金香 x?T b q/q
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9dRQ1`Zfx0+the (problem/issue) whether to do or to do  in contemporary society.

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There is a public controversy about the problem whether to set firecrackers or not during Spring Festivals.紫金香3X3M zc'~&Pe+_.?]'r

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There is a public debate over the issue whether to read extensively or selectively.紫金香V*Vis`Dx8[
There is a general discussion over the problem whether lucky number bring good luck or not.紫金香u)A6DT"Hj r6OS

t o3@ ~#] d0A heated discussion whether( to do or to do/从句) is in the air nowadays.

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A heated discussion whether to set firecrackers or not is in the air nowadays.紫金香|ne}&V KC*Z

3n*\e/|%b9K0A heated discussion whether to read selectively or extensively is in the air nowadays.紫金香@J0}#H G+f

!W:f9c3}6U JVX0A heated discussion whether a test of spoken English is necessary is in the air nowadays.

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As to whether to watch Spring Festival Gala on the eve of a new year,  there is no agreement among the public.
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During my college years, I work as a private tutor to support myself financially. I have learned a lot through this working experience. 紫金香d4h9}!Q/P&w+]xp

j.? `(\/r&_~0Some college students have gone through the same experience with me and argue that students should take a part time job for the reason that it can not only to help them pay for  their tuition, but also make a lot of friends.紫金香? u s6n$kt4m;`A

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Along the street I caught sight of the car of my next-door neighbor’s. With full gratefulness I begged my neighbor to take my friend to the hospital. My roommate was saved in time because of the car.

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Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou city? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the fragrance Hill?紫金香cO)`r%D2c.a,|
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The notion that _______ is supported/ favored by some-______ due to the fact that________ .
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Their dissatisfaction can be directly traced back to the fact that __________.紫金香P8{ D:~8y J;xT

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The majority of Chinese argue that firecrackers should not be banned during festivals for the reason that it is a Chinese tradition. And it should be preserved  by themselves as well as their offspring.

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6Z3xl/B d0A considerable portion of students concede that they prefer to read selectively owing to the fact that there is no time to read without a defined purpose.

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Q/mEH,g,} R&X#?;i0They are already overwhelmed by their coursework and assigned research project.紫金香-w4}#cwXK}#L

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Job-hopping is favored by some graduates due to the fact that they tend to learn more from different working experience.紫金香t&HUg [,O#U%oIL

*dCw7E^\wL UA0As a result, these new working experiences, in turn, also make them feel excited about their lives.

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Q:[j'|"J,U"c%A0The idea that students should take part-time jobs is condemned by some professors and lecturers considering the fact that it may disturb the academic life of their students. 

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Also, they contend that it might be unsafe for students to work outside the campus.
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h-x|(paH.pK)P0On the contrary, others insist that setting firecrackers should be banned on the ground that it is bound to cause serious air pollution. Besides, manufacturing firecrackers may also produce some wastes. These wastes, in turn, would cause serious water pollution if they are directly dumped into rivers.

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However, others take the opposite stand. They maintain that extensive reading is a better way to gain knowledge. Their opinion may have roots in the consideration that it would broaden students’ horizon. Even in some cases, students might gain a lot by reading books that they did not intend to.紫金香3PN kOXs#bk

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cPcm"Ol Y0Tastes differ. Others may oppose to job-hopping. Their opposition arises from the fact that royalty is always one of employers’ considerations when they are recruiting.

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我的观点
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From my point of view,________(, which have roots in my consideration that ____.)
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Personally speaking, firecrackers should not be banned. I just can not imagine what the Spring Festivals would look like without the sparks of firecrackers. Life would look boring in that way.

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决心
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As a result, I set up my mind to do sth to my full capacity.紫金香8y F)AW"Sj

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Thus, I am determined to spare no efforts to  prepare for the spoken English test.

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建议
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I strongly recommend that__紫金香S Q L#p/Y+R5n)}-y

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I strongly recommended that we could plant trees to settle the pollution caused by firecrackers.

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Have you ever feel embarrassed when you encounter a foreigner? Have you ever got stuck in face-to-face communication with English speakers? 紫金香?9S@7buA8Q

9wA.\@7x*i7d uF0Have you ever wished to find one to practice oral English with you? If you had such experience, you would realize how important oral English is to your lives.

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         Therefore, some scholars propose to add a spoken English test to college English Test? They argue that it can stimulate students to practice oral English in a more intensive way.紫金香_ k Zcg0R*aoh,x*Y

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 After analyzing the pros and cons of this test, I concede its benefits outweighs its drawbacks. We can access our English level through this test. It can guide us to learn oral English well. 紫金香&K MN xm2z `(Bg

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2._____人 do sth紫金香iy7r5x/Yq2J0k
3. the number of ___has increased/decreased by % from __to____.
7N%].~m9H04. the loss caused by ______has amounted to _____dollars by this January.

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Such a problem arises from (the fact that__)
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Were the situation to continue, our society would be bound to suffer a huge loss/benefit a lot in all aspects.

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Confronting the situation, it is imperative for us to take drastic measure to tackle it. On the one hand, we can appeal to authorities to⑴ make strict laws and regulations to punish /restrict those who (do sth) ⑵educate sb to do sth.

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To reverse this situation, two measures are feasible to settle this problem.
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It’s imperative for us to take severe measures to put it on hold. 紫金香h)l+G b'gU
What measures should be taken to arrest and reverse this grave situation?

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头部替换
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J-htE:BO+oo0To crack this hard nut, it’s crucial for us to take effective actions. 紫金香_Zv)x3jR

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尾部替换
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Many options still exist, and human beings can still have a bright future.紫金香D Ozf~;Qf#NQ
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A promising future will be at the corner when all the measures are taken. 紫金香z;Vu\r2R Um*v}

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一、引出话题
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二、原因(1)
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三、总结
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3、After meditating on all the factors, I realize that __.
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Thus, I am determined to spare no efforts to do something.
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